From the Center for Writing Excellence? Explain how you will incorporate the feedback…

Assignment: Incorporating Feedback
· Resources: Revising, Peer Reviewing, and Proofreading, the Constructive Feedback
Tutorial, and the Axia College Writing Resources Web Site
· Due Date: Day 7 [Individual] forum Sunday February 1st
· Review One Student’s Revising and Editing Process at
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/axia/wg-student/default.asp at the Axia College Writing
Resources Web site.
· Address the following: What feedback did you receive from your instructor?
You will use the feedback I gave you from your Body Paragraphs and Intro and Conclusions assignments.
From the peer reviewer?
From the Center for Writing Excellence?
Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper.
How will this feedback improve your expository essay?
What feedback did you choose not to include?
Explain your answers.

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Appendix G
 
Peer Review Checklist*
 
What is the main point of this essay?  
 
 
After reading the assigned essay. I found that the main point in the essay was how children are not eating the way that they are supposed to by standers of the USDA.
  What is the greatest strength of this essay?  
They did their research. There was many facts about the weight gain in children in the last years. Also, there where points made on how children can get involved and help out with the meal planning.
 
 
  Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer.  
I am sorry to say that it did not. The essay was well written, but it did not grab my attention.
 
 
  What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience?  
All points made in the essay are on topic. I did not find anything off topic.
 
 
  Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I do not feel that the author needs to add anymore details. All useful information is there.
 
 
 
  Where is the writing unclear or vague?  
 
I found the writing to be very clear.
 
  What is your favorite part of this piece of writing?  
I do not really that there was a favorite part of the essay. All together it was an informative essay.
 
 
  What other comments can you provide for the author?  
I can not think of any other comments for the author. I found the essay informative.
 
 
   
 
*Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful
writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing.
 
s the writing unclear or vague?  
 
I found the writing to be very clear.
 
  What is your favorite part of this piece of writing?  
I…

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