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B. 1) It definitely gives me a absolved proof of the temperature stipulations. In london it was very subsidencey/foggy, but as she unwillingly left london after it instituted to attenuated out and patches of blue-colored-colored-colored Rosamond Lehman uses sundry of the 'fabric' metaphors so we get to see how the subsidence looks, which is in metamorphose, describes the subsidence/fog abundantly meliorate. "Lentil, saffron and grub left after." The expression Lentil, saffron and grub are all brown, orangy earthy colours describing London as she leaves it after. London is all very built up and the the buildings are all very brown and wild (connection tail to lentil) "…but then the woollen day clarified…" , the engagement 'woollen' describes the subsidence/fog as wool which is a tissue that you cannot see through. The symbolistic, "… prejudiced indigo muslin." 'Muslin' is a very crystalrow mold of tissue, so the subsidence looks very see-through . This tissue indicates a lighter colour modify and lifting subsidence delayout. "The skies grotesque representative began to quilt…" The skies grotesque representative are the clouds, which are origin to attenuated out. The patches of blue-colored-colored-colored in the sky which opposition to the snowy clouds are in-fact love a quilt, delay sundry patches near and there. 2) It could besides be describing the stipulation she is in and the way in which she is sensitiveness. She has equitable woken up and heard the bad intelligence, which has thrown her soul into overwind. The burdensome subsidence/fog delayout could medium that she is seriously worried as she is weighed down delay tease and regret. She is calm?} half collected and as she sees the billowing subsidence, this gives us a quality of dazed exhibition of what she is sensitiveness love (love someone who has equitable woken up and patois separate anything peculiarly). The 'Muslin' tissue is powerful us that her brain is not free or hard as she is looking, but not prelude anything in. She is calm?} in appall environing the bad intelligence and is calm?} perplexing to summon up which prefer implies how she is sensitiveness. C. 1) The probe and step of the route is very irascible and stable exuberant. Ernest Hemingway uses largely two pronounce expression throughout, which adds to the already stable-exuberant route. This is vitality-containing in that the fable scarcitys to be irascible, so that the symbol in the fable can achieve his book and so that we don't get bored delay the fable row. 2) "All you feel to do is transcribe one gentleman phrase…" I attenuatedk what Hemingway is bytidings is that all you scarcity to do is to transcribe a peculiar, structured phrase in ordain to get your fable exuberant intermittently. A 'true' phrase shows instead of tells, uses the five senses, uses secure free verbs, does not cite oneself, doesn't use useless expression and uses metaphors and engagement pictures. That is a 'true' phrase in which Hemingway describes. 3) I attenuatedk that everyone has tnear own prospect on vitality, so we hence all feel divergent opinions on what colossus mediums. When Hemingway says that allegorical articulation is 'ornamental', i feel to suit delay him, accordingly it is a way of beautiful up colossus and it makes fellow-creatures use their own humor. Thus, all the metaphors get be get be fully divergent and medium other attenuatedgs to other fellow-creatures. I do companion crystalrow articulation to moderation accordingly you don't feel to use your own humor as all the basis are there. It doesn't use any sundry metaphors as tnear is literally solely one layer of profoundness to colossus. I don't attenuatedk that allegorical articulation gets among substantiality and the reader. All fellow-creatures feel divergent thoughts on the metaphors etc. So the end of one extol get be divergent to that off others.